Comments on Unicorn Bait: Chapter 55

Thank you everyone for your kind comments. I'm...

2010-07-15T22:35:26.853-04:00

Thank you everyone for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed Unicorn Bait. If interested, the conclusion of Stalking Shadows is being posted over the next couple of days. Chapter 12 is now up of SS.

Read scary mary and stalking shadows plus unicorn ...

2010-07-14T10:02:35.395-04:00

Read scary mary and stalking shadows plus unicorn bait in one day.. must.. have.. more.. O___O

~alex

Oh yeah Aimee again just wanted to say that I read...

2010-06-06T10:09:41.666-04:00

Oh yeah Aimee again just wanted to say that I read this whole story non-stop, couldn't leave the computer! I had to have my dinner brought into me lol. Thanks for a good no perfect story to read. Thanks, you rock!
Aimee xx

Man i'm not kidding i'm sooo close to cryi...

2010-06-06T10:06:39.493-04:00

Man i'm not kidding i'm sooo close to crying! I loved it TOO much!!!! It CAN'T end, it just can't! But that was perfect! I hope you've either already gotten it published or you'r going to. God you'd get alota money i would buy one instantly!!! I loved it!!! Why'd you have to stop there?! Congrats though brilliant story. I'm trying to write a story too hopfully

I started reading this story last night, went to w...

2010-01-28T20:52:03.400-05:00

I started reading this story last night, went to work with it on my mind and rushed home to finish it. You must do a sequel. I LOVED IT!!!

I've also read Scary Mary and up to Ch 10 Pt 1 of Stalking Shadows. When is the rest of it coming out? January 2010 is almost over. Please come out of your hiatus!!!

Haha i started reading this story this morning and...

2009-11-01T12:20:49.335-05:00

Haha i started reading this story this morning and havent taken my eyes from the screen since! Your amazing. Seriously.

Beth

I read the story till 3 a.m. It is a wonderful mix...

2009-10-17T09:12:00.774-04:00

I read the story till 3 a.m. It is a wonderful mixture of what people like in fantasy, love stories and fairy tales. Though half of that stuff has been already used by other authors (unicorns, masked warriors who are extremely good at kisses, secret tunnels, witches, etc.), another half, including two moons, is real success. One should have a gift to fascinate people with well-trodden plots and

Fudge!! I wanted it to continue going on :( I even...

2009-09-14T19:25:56.152-04:00

Fudge!! I wanted it to continue going on :( I even got in trouble reading this story during work, and it had to stop at chapter 55?!

Lol, I do hope you make more though. I have never EVER been soo interested in a book before like this. If this is ever out in stores, I'm buying as many as I can to give to my buds, and if they won't accept it ... well they will, trust me ;)

Thank you, Anon. Do you mean you pictured your fri...

2009-08-20T15:59:19.680-04:00

Thank you, Anon. Do you mean you pictured your friends and family as the characters? I've never been able to do this.

I have really enjoyed reading this story. I was to...

2009-08-20T13:27:41.606-04:00

I have really enjoyed reading this story. I was totally brought into the story and related all the characters to my friends and family. I was drown in immediately which is what I liked. You have done and excellent job. The sexual tension was well written. Thank you for a good read.

Thank you, Christy. I do need to give UB another g...

2009-08-12T23:08:12.506-04:00

Thank you, Christy. I do need to give UB another good going over, but I'm glad you were able to find enjoyment in it despite its flaws.

Really enjoyed the story, your writing, and the ch...

2009-08-12T19:03:15.809-04:00

Really enjoyed the story, your writing, and the characters. Evil kangaroos,orange yetis and double moons were certainly interesting touches and allowed the strangeness of it all to have a weird feeling of familiarity. Mr. Squibbles had the best insults I've seen in a long time! Yes, there were some awkward transitions here and there, and some grammatical errors, but overall a terrific story.

Hi Amy, Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you e...

2009-07-29T23:45:31.109-04:00

Hi Amy,

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to finish. I'm not sure how I could get further into anyone's heads except Naomi since this is strictly her POV, but if the characters didn't feel real enough to you then that is something I should think on and try to correct.

Well, I just found this story yesterday afternoon ...

2009-07-29T07:28:48.119-04:00

Well, I just found this story yesterday afternoon and finished the last half of last chapter today, I liked it, I liked the humor of it,( evil kangaroos, wizard of oz reference, etc.) and I had to read all the way to the end,but it didn't really make me FEEL, in the way some other stories do, it would have helped to get a little farther into the characters heads, it felt like a rough draft.

Thanks, ALI3N. I have played around with the idea ...

2009-07-26T22:16:06.304-04:00

Thanks, ALI3N. I have played around with the idea of a what connection Naomi would have with the unicorns afterwards.

Nice! Great Story. Next book about this, is maki...

2009-07-26T20:21:46.802-04:00

Nice!

Great Story.

Next book about this, is making Tavik visit his mother-in-law ...

(for serving the unicorns, she should be granted to be a follower of them; and perform healing touches and transport at will; and be able to speak to them; but she can't visit any other gods temples.)

clicks link to stalking shadows XD

2009-06-18T10:09:59.173-04:00

*clicks link to stalking shadows* XD

LOVELY! hate to be a pooper but: 'The light th...

2009-06-18T10:08:47.416-04:00

LOVELY! hate to be a pooper but: 'The light that erupted again.' um, it's a phrase. :)

i half-expected to hear errilol scream. hmm. that would've been so neat. the cliche of all cliche, but the villain scream is missing! hahaha. i so want it, i can't get over.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!! it's over. :(

can you hear the people chanting

pooja, Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for all the...

2009-05-26T22:27:17.818-04:00

pooja,

Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for all the comments. :-)

danx 4 writin such a damn gud buk danx danx danx d...

2009-05-26T11:46:44.404-04:00

danx 4 writin such a damn gud buk
danx danx danx danx danx
i loved d buk its damn cool

Denise, I like hearing how people may have liked ...

2009-04-28T08:50:00.000-04:00

Denise,

I like hearing how people may have liked one story better than another. It's interesting to find out what appeals to people. I am thinking about a sequel, but haven't committed anything to paper yet. I'll get to it eventually. You certainly are a fast reader. Wish I read that fast or better yet wrote that fast. Thanks.

S.A Hunter! I love this story much better then the...

2009-04-28T00:51:00.000-04:00

S.A Hunter! I love this story much better then the other two I've read. Please PLEASE PLEASE either write the sequel or let me play around with it. Once again! Quick reader. Read it in 3 1/2 hours!

The alaskan chick.

Rae, thank you so much. We'll have to wait and see...

2009-03-28T02:26:00.000-04:00

Rae, thank you so much. We'll have to wait and see if Tavik and Naomi have any more adventures.

So it's the end.:'D sad but it has a nice ending.i...

2009-03-21T01:20:00.000-04:00

So it's the end.:'D sad but it has a nice ending.i'm kind of hoping for an epilogue, if the sequel will be not be written in a matter of time.But, it's worth waiting.
You're a really wonderful writer, windvein/s.a. hunter.ü
surely you're one of a kind.
keep writing,stay inspired.
i'll be waiting for your other works.ü
Godbless!

-best regards from the philippines,

Jessica,

It really helps to know that peopl...

2009-02-20T07:24:00.000-05:00

Jessica,

It really helps to know that people are enjoying my stuff. Thank you for all the encouragement.

I'm working on chapter 6 of SS today. Hope I can get a good bit done.