tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post3086731814770828054..comments2008-03-27T18:15:06.143-04:00S.A. Hunterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-39891390449387742452008-03-27T18:15:06.143-04:002008-03-27T18:15:06.143-04:00

Ren, thank you! I find your comments very helpful. And it made sense :-).<BR/><BR/>rojy, imagine if I only updated once a week. And these chapters are actually longer than I originally planned.

Windveinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-76021998185691432082008-03-27T12:35:44.876-04:002008-03-27T12:35:44.876-04:00

i read scary mary and it was wonderful and am already captured by this one and i think you have done well so far but please try to make the chapters a little longer! I really can't wait for the new chapter!

rojynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-18468766058418574002008-03-27T06:37:29.031-04:002008-03-27T06:37:29.031-04:00

It was great. Lots of tension. I wish I knew a bit more about what is going on in their minds as to thought process. well Naomi at least, I'm sure knowing Tavik's mind would be a big spoiler. <BR/>The narrative describes mostly what she feels physically, touches on the emotional response, but I was surprised that she didn't hesitate more with the whole need to be a virgin stakes all high and

Rennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-83548915520579245502008-03-27T05:37:29.630-04:002008-03-27T05:37:29.630-04:00

This is closest I've ever come to writing a love scene. If anyone wants to give their opinion, I'd appreciate it. They're a lot tougher to write than I thought.

Windveinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081noreply@blogger.com