<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post5624539296940742704..comments</id><updated>2009-06-09T17:12:03.088-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Comments on Unicorn Bait: Chapter 4</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/feeds/5624539296940742704/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html'/><author><name>S.A. Hunter</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>7</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-8288004673665039674</id><published>2009-06-09T17:12:03.088-04:00</published><updated>2009-06-09T17:12:03.088-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Yeah, I decided not to name the chapters. Coming u...</title><summary type='text'>Yeah, I decided not to name the chapters. Coming up with chapter titles is hard.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/8288004673665039674'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/8288004673665039674'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1244581923088#c8288004673665039674' title=''/><author><name>S.A. Hunter</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='08249739619140986450'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-2115043855349730176</id><published>2009-06-01T11:19:07.154-04:00</published><updated>2009-06-01T11:19:07.154-04:00</updated><title type='text'>i dunno, i think i prefer longer chapters. makes u...</title><summary type='text'>i dunno, i think i prefer longer chapters. makes us think of good reviews. :) and there's less chance of something going wrong and not being able to read the next chapter. i also noticed that you didn't name the chapters anymore (maybe because they're so many?), i was kinda sad about that. for me, it makes the chapter more interesting to read :)</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/2115043855349730176'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/2115043855349730176'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1243869547154#c2115043855349730176' title=''/><author><name>pharmac</name><uri>http://www.plurk.com/carmel_XD</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-4397733314714197116</id><published>2008-03-27T05:59:36.155-04:00</published><updated>2008-03-27T05:59:36.155-04:00</updated><title type='text'>It's all about finding a happy medium I suppose. I...</title><summary type='text'>It's all about finding a happy medium I suppose. I think I've found it now. Hard to say.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/4397733314714197116'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/4397733314714197116'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1206611976155#c4397733314714197116' title=''/><author><name>Windvein</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='08249739619140986450'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-9186110849881755384</id><published>2008-03-18T18:31:50.459-04:00</published><updated>2008-03-18T18:31:50.459-04:00</updated><title type='text'>I'm going to echo Ms. Richards, I like the short c...</title><summary type='text'>I'm going to echo Ms. Richards, I like the short chapter lengths - you get just enough before going to the next, and it lets your eyes take a break while the next page loads/you think of a comment etc.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/9186110849881755384'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/9186110849881755384'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1205879510459#c9186110849881755384' title=''/><author><name>Stormy</name><uri>http://www.wibblypress.net</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-3580229516724337940</id><published>2008-03-01T02:56:50.882-05:00</published><updated>2008-03-01T02:56:50.882-05:00</updated><title type='text'>"Like Skeletor, but scary."I lol'd. Personally, I ...</title><summary type='text'>"Like Skeletor, but scary."&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I lol'd. Personally, I like these short chapters. Tiny attention span have I, no matter how amusing the text I'm reading. I really enjoy this story -- 'tis a refreshing break from all the fantasy serials that take themselves far too seriously.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Keep up the good work, eh!</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/3580229516724337940'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/3580229516724337940'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1204358210882#c3580229516724337940' title=''/><author><name>Ms. Richards</name><uri>http://grandiacompact.weebly.com</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-8353376893076272216</id><published>2007-12-22T20:56:09.180-05:00</published><updated>2007-12-22T20:56:09.180-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Thanks, anon! It's funny you said that about chapt...</title><summary type='text'>Thanks, anon! It's funny you said that about chapter lengths. I purposely made them short because the popular opinion concerning writing on the net is that shorter is better. But that doesn't mean the popular opinion is right. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;It's something I will have to consider more before making a final decision, but for now, UB has been broken into roughly 4-page chapters. Scary Mary has much </summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/8353376893076272216'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/8353376893076272216'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1198374969180#c8353376893076272216' title=''/><author><name>Windvein</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='08249739619140986450'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-1576768930222896781</id><published>2007-12-22T05:54:47.477-05:00</published><updated>2007-12-22T05:54:47.477-05:00</updated><title type='text'>I wish the chapters were longer ...I'm looking for...</title><summary type='text'>I wish the chapters were longer ...&lt;BR/&gt;I'm looking forward to reading more!</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/1576768930222896781'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/5624539296940742704/comments/default/1576768930222896781'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html?showComment=1198320887477#c1576768930222896781' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://unicornbait.sahunter.net/2007/12/chapter-4.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-5624539296940742704' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/4827653367507383439/posts/default/5624539296940742704' type='text/html'/></entry></feed>