Comments on Unicorn Bait: Chapter 45

nice chapter. i'm loving this. more! more! XD

2009-06-10T08:17:56.522-04:00

nice chapter. i'm loving this. more! more! XD

Nicole, RL is boring. Stay on the interwebs. The i...

2008-11-21T13:56:36.123-05:00

Nicole, RL is boring. Stay on the interwebs. The interwebs are good.

i know i have RL stuff to do, i just know it... bu...

2008-09-16T10:31:28.461-04:00

i know i have RL stuff to do, i just know it... but i HAVE to keep reading... :D

Wow! Glad you enjoyed both. Next chapter on Monday...

2008-06-19T22:22:52.853-04:00

Wow! Glad you enjoyed both. Next chapter on Monday!

I really enjoy your writing.. I read through 'Scar...

2008-06-19T12:43:15.026-04:00

I really enjoy your writing.. I read through 'Scary Mary' and most of 'Unicorn Bait' in two days.. I just got to the last chapter of 'Unicorn Bait' today and I am really anxious for the next installment.

Rob, I have to admit, I'm really proud of 'Deus ex...

2008-06-18T22:33:56.955-04:00

Rob, I have to admit, I'm really proud of 'Deus ex suburbia'.

Kat, thanks and nice reasoning. Errilol is defintely not someone you can bring home to mother.

It's so easy for me to forget Naomi is not from th...

2008-06-18T10:38:11.729-04:00

It's so easy for me to forget Naomi is not from the same world she's in (I'm hoping this means she forgets it too, but we'll see ;) ). It completely threw me off when you mentioned Rob Zombie and Muppets, and I had to think for a second before I realized, "Oh yeah. Naomi knows Muppets." Hehe. Awesome chapter as usual. I like seeing that there may be more reasoning behind Tavil avoiding his own

-> "Deus ex suburbia" -> Imagine if Rob Zombie had...

2008-06-18T05:36:00.075-04:00

-> "Deus ex suburbia"

-> Imagine if Rob Zombie had designed a Muppet

Great lines. You had me in stitches! Fantastic!

Anon, you were right. That stray word has been del...

2008-06-17T21:54:47.855-04:00

Anon, you were right. That stray word has been deleted. Thanks.

Rojy, right back at you.

Love in the air, could things get better, I agree ...

2008-06-17T13:21:14.501-04:00

Love in the air, could things get better, I agree with brittany the chapter is good! Mother is revealing her powers to help her son and things are heating up between my favourite Tavick and Naomi, u made me happy windvein :)

The paragraph that starts with Tavik/Errilol sayin...

2008-06-17T12:25:51.110-04:00

The paragraph that starts with Tavik/Errilol saying "I'll be back for you" has a sentence fragment at the end.

Errilol is the right spelling.

2008-06-17T01:25:23.684-04:00

Errilol is the right spelling.

Damn, you read quick! Wish I typed as fast.

2008-06-17T01:24:03.513-04:00

Damn, you read quick! Wish I typed as fast.

No, it was good! Errilol (sp?) is an ass of a god...

2008-06-17T01:18:53.891-04:00

No, it was good! Errilol (sp?) is an ass of a god, but I'm beginning to adore Tavik.

Keep chapters coming!

Well, there you go. I feel like it's still pretty ...

2008-06-17T01:10:57.384-04:00

Well, there you go. I feel like it's still pretty rough so if you want to offer suggestions for improvement please go ahead.