tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post9036564547365901021..comments2008-11-21T13:45:27.878-05:00S.A. Hunterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-8081156642438061292008-11-21T13:45:27.878-05:002008-11-21T13:45:27.878-05:00

Nicole, fixed! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. You're excellent. :-)

S.A. Hunterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-87562586660849153672008-09-16T10:03:47.455-04:002008-09-16T10:03:47.455-04:00

"...but she was loathed to say it was bad luck to end up there." - loathe <BR/><BR/>i am so glad i started reading this after it's finished being written. the tension is only just bearable!

Nicole Spruithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13347100501018290383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-1661404451955995322008-06-02T21:03:05.659-04:002008-06-02T21:03:05.659-04:00

Thank you, Rob. That is like one of THE most annoying mistakes to make. Will fix.

Windveinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14094259995695058081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4827653367507383439.post-49393614541889630602008-06-02T11:47:32.568-04:002008-06-02T11:47:32.568-04:00

"He does not protect his devoted. He could care less if they die in battle.”<BR/><BR/>could -> couldn't ?<BR/>die -> died ?<BR/><BR/>Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!<BR/><BR/>Rob

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